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Do I not need love?
Just an appealing mass of
Smooth, inflaming flesh?
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Just a little snippet for the whole "love versus lust" argument.

Another piece I agonized FOREVER about posting. As much as I like to say as much as I can in as few words as I can, haiku still seems impossibly short to me.

Or maybe I'm just being too hard on myself again. Bah.

I feel like I've said all this before. :P

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:icontsukashi:
I agree with you...it might say everything, but it's kinda awkward with it being so....small. Maybe i'm just used to your loooooong stuff

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When I read about the evils of drinking, I quit reading.

Damaged people are dangerous, We know how to survive.
:iconiggyupstart:
I like it! You should do more short stuff!

It's like smooshing (<- real intelligent word there) everything down to the most basic form to get the thoughts you want across.

Heh ... I have a thing for simplicity.

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"One see's clearly only with the heart ... Anything essential is invisible to the eyes."
-- The fox.
:iconiggyupstart:
Damn DA not letting me fav this!

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"One see's clearly only with the heart ... Anything essential is invisible to the eyes."
-- The fox.
:iconiggyupstart:
Nevermind, after I yelled at it, it let me. :)

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"One see's clearly only with the heart ... Anything essential is invisible to the eyes."
-- The fox.
:iconcibbwin:
*grins* Yanno, I might actually give haiku some serious thought, then. I like simplicity, too, but sometimes I feel like I'm not saying enough.

Yay for smooshing!

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It takes courage to enjoy it!
:iconcibbwin:
Yeah, I am too. :[

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It takes courage to enjoy it!
:iconiggyupstart:
Sometimes people can say too much.

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"One see's clearly only with the heart ... Anything essential is invisible to the eyes."
-- The fox.
:iconcibbwin:
Aye, you are right. :)

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It takes courage to enjoy it!
:iconcibbwin:
Haha. Usually yelling at something makes it do what you want. :D

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It takes courage to enjoy it!

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